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  1. Simonbob

    Original Fiction The Angaran Chronicles

    As an Australian, I must now look down on you for you being the little brother! More seriously, you're still setting the scene, so it's hard to say where you'll go, and what I'll see as an issue.
  2. Simonbob

    Original Fiction The Angaran Chronicles

    Nice start. I'll give more feedback when I have more to comment on. Although, normally, a spoken comment is marked with "speech" rather than the 'speech' you've been using.
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