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That's a pretty awesome story idea. It's a very broad scope. I can see why you're having issues. Too many POV, too many moving parts. You got a lot further than I would have, at least!;);) It might work better if you do a part at a time, I guess? But, you'd know better than me.

Well..... He was schleping her, I guess.:D:D

Poor bastard. And, stupid, stupid bitch. Risking everything over petty crap. Indoctrination really is the most potent thing Reapers have, isn't it?

Good luck. And I hope you never slip, that kinda thing can really suck.

Turians. The fact that the former top poli of the Turians is now going out to pick a fight as a way to get his head together, and this is completely reasonable to the locals? Man. What a bunch.

So..... He's RED?

Nah, a planet's a really big place. If they'd hung around, they'd get squished, but just running for it? That, they could do.

They got away. Good. It shouldn't be easy.

That works better for me. They're still crimanaly lazy, but they feel like they might be an actual threat.

They're really over confidant, aren't they? I'm finding it a bit much. They're supposed to be dangerous, and, well, so far they just aren't.

"Happy birthday to you, happy...."

"I'm drunk, that means I'll try the loonie theory!" Nice.