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    Battletech An SI in the Concordat - GhostRider's Revenants (Battletech CYOA)Rev.2

    That's what happens when you're too busy punching yourself in the face to bother anyone else. People throw you a few concerned looks, other people glance over to see if you haven't knocked yourself out yet so they can take your shit, and the rest point and laugh from a safe distance.
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    Battletech An SI in the Concordat - GhostRider's Revenants (Battletech CYOA)Rev.2

    Your right it does improve. Too bad it slowly stops being a personal story and starts to read more like a history book. Hopefully he does the smart thing and forces Wolf to do what he was ordered to do. Warn and prepare the IS for the clans.
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    Battletech An SI in the Concordat - GhostRider's Revenants (Battletech CYOA)Rev.2

    I assume English isn't your first language, but I seriously suggest finding someone wling to edit these chapters. The grammer near completely ruins the story.
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