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Loved the scene with the Mox, and I agree, damn you for the cliffhanger! Money on Hiromi lining up more gigs for Moto! Whether of the Rockerboy or Section 9 variety. And is that foreshadowing I see for some gonk trying to steal a preem ride?

IRL yeah, but this is Cyberpunk and these are gonks.

OK, who else thinks that some dumbshit gonk Scavs are going to try and wreck the concert to get revenge on Motoko and Section 9, only to get their shit pushed in for the most epic concert XBD in Night City history 8-)

Nice simple gig, loved the callback to the failed infiltration LOL. And Jun, Jun, Jun, you know that Motoko is a high tier netrunner, you could have very easily asked your imouto to track your gonk of a chum to make sure he's not doing something gonk-ish.

Nice to see Malcolm get some screentime, but he totally should have let Motoko drive 8-) Nice to see Motoko-chan finally get an Afterlife gig. This is going to be easy! What could possibly go wrong! It'll be a cakewalk, totally not worthy of an XBD! Why is everybody glaring at me?

Jun is handling this rather well, actually, this guy is an old choom of his, after all, and chooms stick up for each other, but he's being smart about it, having realized that there is more to life than rep and status games. In short, Jun is *growing up* and becoming the big brother he needs to...

Nice to see Jun trying to upgrade his choom from immature idiot to semi-adult. Really liking the look inside the head of other characters too! The bit with Rebecca teasing Hiromi, then scrolling the BDs was excellent, and I love the bit of Section 9 marketing added in LOL. What was it Yogurt...

Motoko finishes up the Tachikoma, assigns it to follow Jun around as she realizes that he has terrible taste in chooms and is worried about him, the incredible cuteness results in turbocharging Jun's rizz aura, which only grows exponentially when he and Jackie start working together. Jun and...

You mean put two clueless harem protagonists together, mix in the typical chaos of Night City, stir a few times, and profit? I'm all in for this!

Yeah, Jun really needs a choom upgrade or his clueless harem protag aura will doom him.

Some more possibly silly ideas A- A BD of Motoko teaching Section 9 and SLS martial arts, set to Kung Fu Fighting or Make A Man Out Of You. B- Keeping on the BD train -An XBD shredding scavs to Disturbed - Down With The Sickness -A ninja-run XBD set to Blondie - One Way Or Another...

There are a number of dangling plot threads that you could touch on, plus some ideas to help with the writer's block... A- That cyberdeck from the scrapyard fridge B- Has she cancelled her gym membership yet? That could lead to hilarity C- That one upperclassman who got pissed at Hiromi...

*sputtering*. I may be old but I can still use the kids slang! Lolol

Hiromi x Motoko OTP LOL And Motoko thinks Jun has rizz :cool:

Huzzah! I'm so glad to see this update! Motoko, Motoko, Motoko... the 'do as I say not as I do' clueless protag, I love it! Why am I suddenly imagining her challenging some musclebound gonk avatar to a dance off, Guardians of the Galaxy style?

No need to apologize, and I am loving this story!