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It's more just... I'm imagining the title will still convey that it's urban fantasy, right? So the establishment of "there is fantasy in my urban" isn't super needed in the exposition.

Biggest problem I can see is the lack of a consistent tense. Sometimes you're using present tense and on other occasions you're using past tense. It's a bit jarring. Aside from that... *looks up at title* *looks at statement* No shit. Unnecessary exposition takes the reader out of the...