Blasterbot

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[X] King Gaiseric might be able to provide some insight, but it might also be a waste of time. The Skull Knight was always cryptic about it all, and I could not afford any distractions.
 

Gladiator

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Fixed a couple typos in chapter twenty-eight.

Also, only two more chapters to go. I plan on each being 10,000 words each. They may take a while. Word of warning.
 

Gladiator

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And fixed a couple more typos, and rephrased a couple things to make the paragraph structure flow more seamlessly.
 

Gladiator

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I went over all of the chapters again, edited and rephrased some things for more consistency with later chapters, and fixed any and all remaining typos I could find.

I would recommend reading from start to finish now. In order to get an idea of the differences. Most are minor ones. Just there to phrase things more eloquently.
 

Gladiator

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I made a few more tweaks. Mainly to be more descriptive about some characters and their transformations, their appearance in particular, but especially in the case of Guts. Who I felt needed more love.
 

Gladiator

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Did some more polishing for a lot of the chapters in order to improve phrasing and some descriptions, and fixed one remaining typo in Devourer of the Sun.
 

Gladiator

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Added a cover for the story, and did some more polishing.

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Gladiator

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Currently. What I generally think of the appearance for Arlan. At least when he is not using Radiance.

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As for Guts as The White Wolf?

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