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Fixed the last batch of typos I could find.

Fixed another typo in the latest chapter, and added a bit more about Sanguinius.

Also, fixed a weird typo I just noticed in the latest chapter near the Grandmother Crow quote. "4th." No idea how that got there. Gone now.

Rest easy, Arlan.

Chapter 29: The Idea of Evil "The very best of people? That which makes them worthy of life? Which allows them to grasp towards a purpose to call their own? An adventure unlike any other? It is the poison that will kill them one day. Just as cancer is the abundance of life which leads to death...

And improved some more phrasing in a couple chapters.

Also uploaded the story to Archive Of Our Own. https://archiveofourown.org/works/52241776/chapters/132149332

Currently. What I generally think of the appearance for Arlan. At least when he is not using Radiance. As for Guts as The White Wolf?

Updated Chapter 20: Conquest. Added more vividness to some descriptions.

Fixed a couple more typos and rephrased some things in Chapter 12: A World of Wonders.

Made some improvements to Chapter 26: I Promise.

Added a cover for the story, and did some more polishing.

Did some more polishing for a lot of the chapters in order to improve phrasing and some descriptions, and fixed one remaining typo in Devourer of the Sun.

I made a few more tweaks. Mainly to be more descriptive about some characters and their transformations, their appearance in particular, but especially in the case of Guts. Who I felt needed more love.

They can't comprehend the notion of objective good and evil, and that an entire race be representative of it in fiction. Just look at Goblin Slayer. Goblins are literally created by a god to solely pillage and rape. This to the point there are not any goblin women, goblin children are exact...

Not really their fault there for the last one. More chaos being chaos, and the nature of the world being fucked up the ass. Still relatively nice compared to other xenos.

The Imperium of Man is evil out of necessity. They have to be like this, or it's not just death. It's death, and an eternity of murder rape in the Warp. Orks are literally monsters who can't live without war. Killing them is okay. They will even thank you for a good death because of their war...

I went over all of the chapters again, edited and rephrased some things for more consistency with later chapters, and fixed any and all remaining typos I could find. I would recommend reading from start to finish now. In order to get an idea of the differences. Most are minor ones. Just there...

Also, I decided to make it clear that this is a crossover with D&D as a whole. Since I basically included everything by now.

And fixed a couple more typos, and rephrased a couple things to make the paragraph structure flow more seamlessly.