How Would YOU Have (Re)Written Borrasca or Just It's Ending?

CarlManvers2019

Writers Blocked Douchebag

As the title says, this' a thread for anyone who ever read or even knows of the summary/plot of C.K. Walker's Creepypasta "Borrasca"

Yeah, it's fucked up and YMMV, I gotta say the ending was a downer due to the lack of pathetic screaming and pleas for mercy from the bad guys

I would have rewritten it so that the MC somehow unlocks or uses physical abilities or powers that only manifested due to the sheer trauma, ala Kamui or Mangekyo Sharingan and proceeded to creepily slaughter people

How would you have done it instead?
 

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