I've actually managed to salvage Emancipation? I'm shocked!Fascinating. A little ribbing and some negotiations. Also I love the joke of them using Earth to escape a crooked space cop. Lol, that one had me. But yes, I'm liking this a lot.
Nah just one throne that looks like it was thrown up by a Kaiju sized Peacock and the statue of Hera is sitting on it.I found that last bit of this chapter confusing. Is there 2 thrones, one with a statue one with a person or is it some other variation.
Well, her husband's all "I wanna do business with these guys and they seem cool! Plus they make this magical drink called whiskey!"Okay, I'm curious to see what business Hera has with the Tau'ri. And I love how Sepu underestimated Woosley and the Tau'ri. Thinking them not quite so knowledgeable of Goa'uld law when infact they became very quick studies.
Thank you, honestly so many of you guys are so much more talented than me. And to hear you all enjoy my work is humbling.This piece was truly fascinating to read. I love the pure character work going on here. Dude...I am in awe. And I am inspired. Cause I need to reach that level of character development for my own story. This makes me want to do better.
Thank you, I was worried initially that this would be too much talking and not enough action. But I'm glad you guys enjoy the charactization. Sometimes it takes me awhile to get shit done though because I'm eternally terrified of characters sounding the same.Your characterization is the strongest in this story. Best of all it doesn't feel dry.
On another note I think at this point within the universe you could make a pitch the original sg1 series as a parody similar to wormhole extreme in the tv series. Prepare the world for disclosure and make the goa'uld imperium a comedy series at the same time.
Go ahead and use it. I think it would start a Trend similar to watching b movie cult classicsThank you, I was worried initially that this would be too much talking and not enough action. But I'm glad you guys enjoy the charactization. Sometimes it takes me awhile to get shit done though because I'm eternally terrified of characters sounding the same.
Dude that's a great idea! You okay with me borrowing this?
"Huh, I'm played by the MacGyver guy? Sweet."
"No sir, not that McGyver guy, the reboot guy"
"I find this most unrealistic, if the Goa'uld were this insane the Jaffa would have risen in rebellion against them tens of thousands of years ago."