Crossover "Whispers of Destiny" - Undiscovered Frontier Season 2 (Star Trek/BattleTech/Mass Effect/Others)

2-14 Commentary
  • So, 2-14's probably one of the big landmarks of Season 2 as it gives the first in-depth look at the S0T5 universe, or as it's known elsewhere, the Sovereigns of the Stars setting. It's an SF gonzo setting created by Shroom Man, Siege, and other posters from SDN who've set up their own small forum, Omniverse One, which they use to mostly bounce around setting ideas. Shroom himself is a big Alejandro Jodorowsky fan, as well as Moebius and other artists and creators who tend to make "out-there" soft sci-fi and fantasy. Stuff like "The 5th Element" and "Valerian" are their things. SOTS itself incorporates nods and elements to all sorts of other SF works: Solaris, for instance, has inspirations from 5th Element, Blade Runner, even Star Wars to an extent (in that it's a massive ecumenoplis, that is, a city-planet, or city-moon in this case).

    A lot of their ideas for this setting were further mutated when they used their creations in SDN Worlds 4, an STGOD on stardestroyer.net that ran from 2010 to, oh, late 2011/early 2012. The stuff other people developed inspired further elaboration on their part.

    As Shroom himself explains:

    We started goofing around with "S0T5" in 2005, way before I knew about SDN. Initially it was very inspired by Verhoven's sci-fi and other 1980s ruthless action sci-fi stuff. I think elements of that still come off with how aggro everyone in the 'verse is.

    But like dissatisfaction with dull milwankers and some of our own fixations, on Neuromancer and Gibson's other stuff, on Image comic's Saga by Fiona Staples, of Image's PROPHET re-envisioning by Brandon Graham, etc., and of course the Metal Hurlant craziness and Jodorowsky and such, fueled the new-S0T5. It's a deliberate attempt to escape what we see as what's stifling some parts of sci-fi.

    Anyway, as I was writing my way through Season 1 and considering Season 2, I realized I had a role for such a place as Solaris, and for a character Siege made that's part of the Solarian dramatis personae, the enigmatic Sidney Hank. I considered, initially, just writing a similar character and a similar kind of place, but that felt dishonest to me. I didn't think I'd use them enough to give them the unique feel necessary to cross the line from ripoff to homage/inspiration. So instead I asked Siege and Shroom about inclusion of SOTS into my multiverse, at least as much as I could make work without breaking my own setting. To my delight, they said yes. and Shroom even became something of a fan of UF (despite it being very much a love letter to the American TV SF that he has so much criticism for).

    For the record, Shroom loved 2-14, as have most of the O1 crowd who read UF (which is like 4 people I think, maybe 5, but it's a small forum). It was the first actual prose story to employ all of the world-building the SOTS makers had carried out over the years, apparently, and since my characters are from other universes it gave the place a further veneer of exotic wonder. He went so far as to say he thought writing this kind of material helped me as a writer.

    Of course, I found ways to incorporate other elements of the setting into my multiverse mythos, and then Captain-General found even more once she started collaborating with me on the myth arc and the parts of it she's covering in the spinoff.

    As an aside, this was the largest UF episode before Season 3 in terms of word count. It's the "picture is worth a thousand words" effect, as I call it. Describing locales and getting in-depth with stuff, as well as action set-pieces, really up the word count of a story. It's the equivalent of a budget-busting sweeps episode for an actual SF show as produced in the 90s.

    P.S. It would be remiss of me to forget to add my thanks to Siege for suggestions in some of Sidney Hank's dialogue. In fact, it's been a couple of years, but I think he even provided a few of the lines I used.
     
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    2-15 Commentary
  • Just a small commentary here. I think it was Ash's Boomstick who put the idea in my head of using Buck Rogers, the 1970s version produced by Glen Larson specifically. I tried the series out and while it's very much a product of its time (Also I never bothered with the 2nd Season), it had a lot of fun bits. So it seemed like a great thing to bring in for an action-adventure romp. Plus the title let me get in some double-meaning by finally having the cast meet a live Darglan. In retrospect I should've had Jornam live a bit longer, dying perhaps in Season 3, and the Darglan funeral oration was a bit too indulgent. I should've kept it to fewer stanzas. I let my desire to showcase the Darglan get away from me there, I'll admit.

    Some of the more serious character stuff, specifically Robert's conversation with Buck toward the end, came from observations I noted from fans on TV Tropes and reported remarks by Gil Gerard, who wanted to show a more serious side to Buck.

    Also, Lucy is teaching people to make lightsabers, and that is awesome. :)
     
    2-16 Commentary
  • So, the Miqo'te were first shown in, I believe, 2-05, with one of the new nav officers that joined alongside Hajar being one. Then, of course, was the merc from 2-07 working for Miss Parker that Zaeed ended up vaporizing.

    At that time it was just a fun little homage. But then I started getting fun ideas about it being more than a homage, and given what I was setting up with Jornam's story in the last episode, it worked.

    The telepath thing is the other big development. I'd had some plans that the telepath war stuff from B5 would be the one major B5 event I dealt with in the series, and perhaps "A Call to Arms" and the Drakh attack on Earth when that time came. Then Season 3 opened up some... unexpected directions, which you'll see eventually. :)
     
    2-18 Commentary
  • If you're wondering about the sudden powers by the no-name security guard, that was to set up the character for her role in Undiscovered Frontier: Origins, the spinoff that commences during UF Season 3.:)
     
    Season 2 Ending Commentary
  • So there we go. In keeping with the myth arc structure, Season 2 ends by further expanding upon our protagonists' knowledge of the mysterious threat the Darglan once fought, indeed, the reason for the end of their interuniversal civilization. And we get the hint of other, ancient forces, besides the Doctor himself, that are still at play in the wider Multiverse...

    Plus the culmination of the hints, going back to 1-14, of Robert's "Bad Wolf" decision.

    I'll say that writing the two-parter was a chore. I watched and re-watched and re-re-watched "Army of Ghosts" and "Doomsday" to get it just right. I tried to keep changes limited solely to the things influenced by the presence of the Aurora crew. It's actually got me reconsidering whether to do this kind of thing again, even though I have a doozy of a plan for one if I decide to go through with it.

    Anyway, I'm going to put up the Season 3 preview next. Plus my announcement of the spin-off from, well, it was two years ago now.
     
    Commentary on 2-01
  • Alright, before I continue, I... will take a moment to talk about this episode, where I introduced a character who I had a long-term plan for... and immediately broke him.

    And did so because I, for once, defied my own dislike for "shock events" through wanting to the Aurora crew find the C1P5 Earth burning.

    James Hawk was made to be the shadow of Robert Dale. Robert has been called (and teased as being) the White Knight in the series, and we'll later see the title "Paladin" employed as well. Hawk is the Dark Knight. The two are very yin-yang in that sense. Robert's strength is drawn from metaphysical, spiritual sources, Hawk is meanwhile a man of material strengths (the combat nanites). Robert's about restorative justice, Hawk embodies retributive justice. Robert and his friends named their ship after the Dawn (the goddess of the dawn in fact) and represent creating a future while Hawk and his friends named their ship to represent punishing the actions of the past.

    But they do share some qualities, although I didn't present that nearly fast enough and will not further comment until I get to the episode where I actually brought them up.

    Another mistake is that we won't see Hawk again until Season 3 (and in episodes that will tie in to material by Harlock). This was an error on my part, a big one. I needed to have Hawk come back in Season 2 at some point to explore his character and to not have him as an antagonistic force before doing the actual next meeting with him. I didn't and, as a result, the fandom on SB quickly grew to loathe Hawk and the Avenger crew. The wholesale destruction his people has wrought has permanently turned much of the fandom against him to the point my original plans would not work. They simply wouldn't. The effect I wanted to create was lost. Even the collaborators I picked up loathe the character so much they immediately rejected the ideas I told them I had, feeling it would come off badly.

    So, *sigh*, adjustments have been made.

    Anyway, I'll continue posting. Next episode we get a big character revelation! And another Mass Effect squaddie makes a first appearance!
     
    Season 3 Preview and Spinoff Announcement
  • The Adventures of the ASV Aurora
    and her crew
    will continue in...

    "Undiscovered Frontier"
    Season 3



    For the crew of the
    Aurora, everything has changed...


    Julia looked at the woman on her viewscreen. "This is Captain Julia Andreys of the Alliance Starship Aurora," she said as introduction.




    "I need a new first officer," Julia said. "Your name is on the top of the list automatically."

    "I am not interested, and you know that," Jarod replied.

    "Well, it has to be someone," Julia insisted. "Do you have any suggestions?"




    A wave of invisible power flew out from Robert and hit Leo and Nasri full force. They went flying across the ward. He looked at his hand in shock. "What's happening to me?" he murmured. "I… I can't control it…!"




    The visage of Sidney Hank was smiling on the screen. Robert had to fight the scowl that threatened to form as he said, "I need your help."

    "So I've heard," answered the Solarian tycoon. "You know my price. A favor…"

    "...for a favor," Robert finished for him.



    While their enemies begin to move…



    Zack grabbed Clara and Cally and pulled them from the street and into the nearest alley. Behind them an explosion baked them with heat. Cally peered skyward and screamed, "It's happening again!"




    The officers of the Aurora faced Maran and knew his somber expression was bad news. "The Cylons have launched a full-scale assault on Alliance space," he said.

    "What about New Caprica?" Julia asked.

    "We believe New Caprica has already fallen…"




    "The Dominion recognizes us for what we are. The true leaders of the Alpha Quadrant. And now that we are joined together, the only people with anything to fear will be our enemies…"

    President Morgan shut off the image of Gul Dukat before turning to Robert and Julia. "Now you see what we have to deal with," he said. "The Dominion has a foothold on this side of the S5T3 galaxy. Our worlds, and those of our allies, are in danger…"




    "We're picking up distress calls on all Alliance bands, Captain."

    Julia gave a concerned look to the others before asking, "Where are they coming from?"

    "M4P2. The colony on Adrana and a Systems Alliance world. Eden Prime."

    "The Batarians?" Jarod suggested.

    "No. According to the distress calls… it's the Geth."




    The hovering platform rushed toward them again. Robert and Commander Shepard dove for cover just as Saren opened fire. The rounds barely missed them and the wounded Salarian nearby.

    "This resistance is pointless!" the Turian declared. "If we do not serve, the Reapers will destroy us all!"

    "And you actually trust them?!" demanded Shepard. "This is insanity, Saren!"

    "No," he answered coldly. "This is survival."




    Julia and Robert looked over the operational map again. Around them the Kentan officers were preparing for the fight to come. Julia looked to Admiral Maran and asked, "Are we sure about this? Throwing everything into this fight?"

    "We are. Victory in the war with the Reich will be determined by how this battle goes. One way or the other."




    Robert stormed up the marble steps into the building proper, dodging fallen bodies and debris as he went. He drew his weapon and stormed through the door. "Let them go!" he shouted.

    "You thought me dead, Herr Dale." On the second floor platform above, Erik Fassbinder stood with his armored troops. His eyes flashed with fury. "And now you pay the price for your presumption."

    "Yeah." Robert snarled. "Lesson learned. I'll make sure you're dead this time."



    ...and their destiny continues to unfold...



    Julia took a ragged breath and looked across the way into the adjoining cell. "Who are you?" she asked, her voice thick with pain.

    The young woman in the cell, looking worn down in her ragged red vest and pants, returned Julia's look. "My name is Miko."




    Robert stared in shock as power circulated around the girl in the torn red and gold clothing. "We have to help Miko!" he heard Julia shout, even as the power buffeted against them.



    "Reshan's secrets will be ours!" shouted the golden-eyed male. He and his dark-robed compatriots charged toward Robert, Lucy, and Meridina, their red energy blades raised.



    "This is the book Ledosh went through so much trouble to give us." Lucy placed it down on the table. Robert and Julia looked at it intently.

    "The Life of Reshan," Meridina said. "Incredible."

    "Ledosh thinks the key to fighting the Brotherhood is in this book," Lucy explained.




    The veiled, dark-suited woman landed in the middle of the fray. Two red lightsaber blades flashed into existence from the weapon in her hand, a double-bladed weapon that she used to intercept Lucy's lightsaber and the red blades of her opponent. "This fight ends now," the woman announced.



    ...a battle to decide the fate of a galaxy awaits…





    The hologram of Sovereign began to speak, in a voice of such malevolence that Robert had to suppress a shudder. "We are legion. The time of our return is coming. Our numbers will darken the sky of every world. You cannot escape your doom."




    The massive metal creature loomed on the holo-viewscreen, its dark lined with red lights. Second by second it grew bigger. "Sovereign's not stopping!" Jarod shouted. "It's on a collision course!"

    "Evasive maneuvers!" Julia cried. "All hands, brace for impact!"



    Undiscovered Frontier
    Season 3
    "The Coming Storm"




    Coming Winter 2017-2018







    And coming soon...






    A new ship.

    An untested crew.

    A captain in exile.

    The secrets of the Multiverse await...




    Big Steve Presents...





    Undiscovered Frontier:
    Origins


    Written by:
    Captain-General
    Devastator

    Conceived by:
    Big Steve
    Captain-General
    Devastator

    Coming 2018
     
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    2-10 Commentary
  • So, yeah Trace, you and I talk about Angel's relationship with Rob... and then I post the episode where she dumps him.:D

    Also the episode where Robert gets to meet Kathy Dearest for the first time and get squicked out by the true nature he senses within. I was inspired by something Stackpole put in Bred for War, when Morgan Kell and Daniel Allard convince Caitlin that she's wrong to pick Kat over Victor, and Caitlin's mental image of Katherine shifts into a voracious monster.

    It was also why I was going to give Katherine an orange ring if I ever did more of that silly "Green Lantern rings in BTech" fic I once did.

    Anyway, stand by for everyone's favorite combination: Nazis and medical drama! And the return of an old "friend" (using the term loosely).
     
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