Personally I fucking hate Anakin..so would never write a story like that because I couldn't trust myself not to shit on the character.
But if you really wanted to do it, you could do it like that.
I mostly hate how Anakin was treated. Well more basically everything involving the Jedi in the prequels, and especially the clone wars related EU.
The Jedi have been in their current role for a thousand years, Yoda has been on the Council for centuries. The idea that they have zero concept of PR and politics is absurd.
Then you have Padme. The Trade Federation attacks her homeworld, the one she is Queen of, and she goes to the Senate for aid only to find it worthless. Then the Trade Federation leads an armed revolt against the Republic and her response is to be a full blown pacifist peacenik (at least on everything beyond the tactical level).
Then you have the GAR. The Jedi pull a galactic scale army out of their ass, with the Council willing to use it despite not even knowing that it existed a few days before, and no one says anything?
I mean Dooku is a former Jedi Master, and pupil of Yoda, who has decided to lead a rebellion against the Republic. Only for the Jedi to show up in the Republic's hour of need with a full blown army that no one knew anything about to oppose him?
More, an army of slaves. One that took a decade to grow, meaning that the order for its construction was at least that old.
And lets not forget the Navy. The Republic basically didn't have one and yet the "Jedi" had plainly built an entire fleet of Acclamator's (an entirely new design purpose designed for the Clone army) in secret. Whether or not the Venerators were a new design or just one in very limited production that got ramped up when the war started is less clear.
All of this supposedly paid for by Master Sifo-Dyas. From what funds? Yoda, Windu, the Council in general, should have noticed if the Jedi accounts were suddenly a galactic scale army and navy short of credits. I mean Sifo-Dyas was a Shadow and so could be expected to have some black funds, but enough to fund an entire military.
Then you have the First Battle of Geonosis. Kenobi discovers the Clone Army and alerts the Council, he follows Fett to Geonosis and gets captured, Anakin & Padme arrive and get captured, Jar-Jar gets Palpatine "Emergency powers", the Jedi pick up the army and head to Geonosis. That entire chain of events occurs in the matter of several hours to a handful of days. And no one seems to question it?
For Palpatine, it's great. Post Order 66 is gets
really easy to paint the Clone Wars as an event orchestrated by the Jedi for the purpose of regaining their Pre-Ruusan Reformation power. Even the Droid shutdown command could be explained as Anakin getting it from the Jedi Temple's databanks and using it.
But for the Jedi to never even really think about the optics of the Clone Wars? Calling them pants on head retarded is an insult to retards who wear their pants on their head.
Anakins idiocies are in large part a consequence of the broader Jedi stupidity.