Stargate Through the Looking Glass and into Heaven.

Hah yeah, that would be fun to write.
Also I suspect that samus would be someone the peers would struggle against because some of her feats are nuts....and no I'm not even counting the manga in that. Or the fact that they screwed up the entry for zebes mass in metroid prime so apparently samus can walk around in 953 Gs casually.
 
i really like this fic, it's original and really captures the sense of scale of a galactic empire, and really reminds me of dune-like sci fi settings, but just one question, is the usa just going to keep scoring victories no matter what like a badly written HFY fic or are they actually going to suffer actual setbacks and actually have consequences for a single un-united planet technologically backwards fighting against even just what is basically space mercenaries with the ultimate high ground and outnumbered,
and even after having created an actual fleet of ships be to the greater empire what a small island nation on earth is to the usa and not some weird bullshit of this one small planet somehow dictating terms on an equal footing with a trans-galactic empire.

also i really get the whole defiance against a vastly superior enemy that outnumbers and outtechs you even worse than the primitive tribes of the pacific against the europeans thing but do not a single one of them really not even think for a moment that perhaps they should focus on diplomatically making sure that the whole of the empire doesn't think that they need to be smacked down earlier in the story?(before apophis making secret fleet) like in the earlier scenes it read like the us is thinking that the best way to deal with the fact that the us is basically the equivalent of a backwards tribe in the middle of nowhere compared to the empire is to focus solely on armed opposition which seems odd.

also i keep getting the odd feeling in this thread about a general feeling of commit basically genocide or attempt to on the empire and this will somehow solve something and not basically end in the entirety of earth getting destroyed in some kind of space jihad
you know a bit like how a 9/11 lead to the us invading a country with barely to nothing to do with it on false pretences except instead of 9/11 you are clearly dealing with a bunch of barbarians who has not only murdered your leaders and gods and priests and alot of other people but also probably someone you are related to and your friends as well and quite clearly have to be exterminated lest they continue and murder even more.
(i just read that hypothetical terran confederacy flashback and honestly in tribalistic jingoist hfy it sounds nice but really can you imagine how WE in a dominant galactic empire position would react if a minor backwater state thats tiny outright threatens to commit mass nuclear terrorist attacks? any being with any sense wouldn't just accept that, and states(from china to russia to uk to america) commit horrible atrocities to stay afloat in real life you know? who's to say such a hypothetical state when faced with such a threat wouldn't start with their ashrak committing a CIA on us and end with total extermination of the terran race "just in case")

sorry i really like this fic it's just i'm really frustrated by alot of things on this thread and something i've noticed in alot of fics of sci fi with aliens is that the alien nations are almost always treated as this static strawman which can neither innovate nor adapt and will collapse totally into mad max anarchy if you remove their leaders and yet are still treated as a big threat (not that you fic has this but i've read so many bad stories like that i cringe everytime), or heck even just have wildly unrealistic feats like a minor state somehow producing more than a galactic superpower, you know, like in real life! and how afghanistan can produce enough ships, weapons and else with enough manpower to both produce and fight a war with china russia and america ALL AT THE SAME TIME! oh wait, they don't.

man this feels really good to finally put into words, sorry if i'm rambling but alot of times i read sci-fi i picture how real life nations act and put that on an interstellar scale, and and my disbelief goes through the roof. well that and the rampant HFY.

honestly the most realistic best ending for earth would be to be something like america before ww1 or qing china though, isolationist, looking inward and not make enemies they can't afford to make for no reason. it'd even be good for the people, no reason to go on countless offensive wars on flimsy reasons and the whims of the military-industrial complex
 
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i really like this fic, it's original and really captures the sense of scale of a galactic empire, and really reminds me of dune-like sci fi settings, but just one question, is the usa just going to keep scoring victories no matter what like a badly written HFY fic or are they actually going to suffer actual setbacks and actually have consequences for a single un-united planet technologically backwards fighting against even just what is basically space mercenaries with the ultimate high ground and outnumbered,
and even after having created an actual fleet of ships be to the greater empire what a small island nation on earth is to the usa and not some weird bullshit of this one small planet somehow dictating terms on an equal footing with a trans-galactic empire.

Have they been scoring victories like no matter what? Even the invasion of Cheyenne mountain resulted in a large majority of the defenders being killed by what amounted to the Secret Service detail of two VIP's within Snake society and not actual soldiers. When they defeated Ra's Jaffa, I think I had Ra keep several thousand Jaffa aboard the Mandjet because he didn't think the Abydonians were dumb enough to rebel twice in as many centuries since he carpet bombed their planet the last time they did. And they won that largely due to Kasuf showing up ten thousand dudes and Ra decided to retreat so he could call for the destruction of Earth with the full might of the Imperium.

Their victory on Chulak had more to do with the fact that they got lucky that most of the people in the area were academy students and soldiers in training who were partially in shock because their version of General Lee suddenly and abruptly committed treason and no one was sure what the hell was going on..plus some sabotage.

Horus? He wiped the floor with them and their "victory" was more in Horus being impressed by Jack's integrity and the Nox deciding humans were fun pets...whose patronage is a hell of a double edged sword wouldn't you think?

Even right now, they're winning against the broken remnants of a third rate military power and then only because most of those guys weren't armed.

Earth forces have faced down six peers I believe, and got stomped on by four of them. That is hardly an HFY track record and I'm doing my best to go against the usual tenant of "Only Earth has professional armed forces" trope you see in most SG fanfics. And their encounter to the Tollan amounted to nearly being exterminated by an irate dictatress who was trying to save face over an imagine slight because she's neurotic as hell.

How they handle the armada of mercenaries and a few Jaffa coming at them, is something you'll have to read to find out. But it won't be "Earth stomp mudhole in fleet of two thousand warships" even if most of that fleet is comprised of shoddy PMC's its still going to be a huge deal.

also i really get the whole defiance against a vastly superior enemy that outnumbers and outtechs you even worse than the primitive tribes of the pacific against the europeans thing but do not a single one of them really not even think for a moment that perhaps they should focus on diplomatically making sure that the whole of the empire doesn't think that they need to be smacked down earlier in the story?(before apophis making secret fleet) like in the earlier scenes it read like the us is thinking that the best way to deal with the fact that the us is basically the equivalent of a backwards tribe in the middle of nowhere compared to the empire is to focus solely on armed opposition which seems odd.

Yes, that's quite literally the mandate of the SGC right now. The United States stellar Navy's mandate is to try and build up a fleet nasty enough that Earth looks like a cactus patch near an oasis that's better off being walked around than confronted for the aggravation caused by stomping through it or the time wasted burning it out. But the whole goal of the SGC is to play cold war politics as the third world country caught between two superpowers (The House of Ra and the House of Tartarus.) with the end goal of doing business with the Imperium not toppling it.



]also i keep getting the odd feeling in this thread about a general feeling of commit basically genocide or attempt to on the empire and this will somehow solve something and not basically end in the entirety of earth getting destroyed in some kind of space jihad

Nah, people are just shitposting and having some fun or letting their outrage at Amunet's unique solution to The Host's conciseness problem. I like their comments and don't mind them, especially since they've been a big help in figuring out how to set up the USSN.

you know a bit like how a 9/11 lead to the us invading a country with barely to nothing to do with it on false pretences except instead of 9/11 you are clearly dealing with a bunch of barbarians who has not only murdered your leaders and gods and priests and alot of other people but also probably someone you are related to and your friends as well and quite clearly have to be exterminated lest they continue and murder even more.

There are quintillions of Lotar and trillions of Goa'uld if you count the lesser breeds, a couple dozen Or so System Lords and probably about eighty peers. spread out across three Galaxies. (Maybe four) I don't think the US could realistically exterminate that nor would such a story interest me in the writing thereof. :ROFLMAO:


(i just read that hypothetical terran confederacy flashback and honestly in tribalistic jingoist hfy it sounds nice but really can you imagine how WE in a dominant galactic empire position would react if a minor backwater state thats tiny outright threatens to commit mass nuclear terrorist attacks? any being with any sense wouldn't just accept that, and states(from china to russia to uk to america) commit horrible atrocities to stay afloat in real life you know? who's to say such a hypothetical state when faced with such a threat wouldn't start with their ashrak committing a CIA on us and end with total extermination of the terran race "just in case")

The System Lords spent 60,000 years fighting some of the most powerful species in existence over an attempt to do something less egregious than genocide. They exterminated two of those species and broke the other's cultural backs. I think Teal'cs debrief made it abundantly clear that attempting such a thing would end in nothing but grief.
honestly the most realistic best ending for earth would be to be something like america before ww1 or qing china though, isolationist, looking inward and not make enemies they can't afford to make for no reason. it'd even be good for the people, no reason to go on countless offensive wars on flimsy reasons and the whims of the military-industrial complex

Probably more like the US post the ACW/ Spanish American War or World War One, respected as an honest broker, a major (relative to size) trade partner and the impartial softpower dude people go to when they want disputes arbitrated by someone without skin in the game.

The whole strategy is to either become loud enough they'll be left alone or to gain a rep as a solid guy that can be counted on in a pinch even if he is a little guy.
 
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yeah honestly about the victories part i get that, it's honestly really nice to see something that doesn't end with "MUH (baseline) HUMAN SPIRIT" and "HUMAN WILL WILL TRIUMPH(didn't for the japanese)" in sci-fi like this honestly it feels like in canon the jaffa were written wholly as like completely needing earth help to even THINK like most of the goa'uld and jaffa felt like a static strawman but that's not how life works, also i'm reasonably certain the fact that jaffa are outright supersoldiers are basically forgotten or ignored in favour of "MUH PURE HUMAN" ,
honestly i think i might have been mostly been mistaking it from other fics and some of the sentiment after that gave the feeling like stargate command and the us in pov felt like they didn't really acknowledge how lucky they were after dakkara like they expect dakkara levels of success to be the norm, or maybe that's just kensey.

also will they ever actually suffer ACTUAL failures? like not pyrrhic victories or horrendous losses but they accomplish their goals but like ACTUAL unavoidable COMPLETE failures every nation will inevitably run into? like FUBAR entire units wiped out type of deal?

actually i just got to that part where you said by the end of it they'd respect the tau'ri martial ability like i can see that, after all tech levels have nothing to do with warrior/soldier spirit and martial ability, i can even see something like highly experience special operations veterans and just infantry veterans and even police being invited to give lectures or whatever (lessons?) in the event of disclosures because the Imperium has been at peace for so long, but wouldn't the earth's militaries also invite some high ranking imperial officers as well? something like a cultural exchange.

i was just rewatching the part in canon where the asgard says that they "cannot think dumb" anymore and that just felt distinctly off to me and alot of this weird sci-fi feeling that seems to me like an extension of the stereotypical american gun fetish blended with either USAFY or HFY which always seemed odd to me especially on larger more "realistic" scale sci-fi (that is to say that all those rocks and space wouldn't be empty like a stellaris game) because if we on earth could make guns then what's to say other species wouldn't have either?

and the whole asgard thing you'd think in canon they'd try literally everything else when their main weapons don't work, like it really doesn't make any sense at all , object + go fast = kinetic, meteors exist so they have no excuse, it's literally thing go FAST AND BIG BOOM IT'S NOT COMPLICATED WHY DID THE WRITERS PRETEND THAT IT MAKES ANY SENSE AT ALL AHHHHHHHHHHH,
anyways yeah that last part is more accurate, though i think it'd be closer to space switzerland, neutral ,nice place, isolationist/defense oriented, respected as a place of neutral diplomacy, niche goods to trade (atleast untill everyone else makes their own spices) but having earth somehow being inexplicably superior to those "advanced minor neutral powers" mentioned around for no reason wouldn't make much sense even with asgard tech, unless earth's first acts an interstellar nation is to launch wars of aggression against it's neighbours which doesn't seem like a good thing for either the society or everyone else, and would probably end in a pacific war japan situation.

also i get that it's for plot reasons, the scientists are basically leonardo da vinci tier and they have an actual AI helping them, but the hy[er advanced tech being reverse engineered so quickly is the weirdest and most unrealistic part about this and most sci fi stories
 
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also i get that it's for plot reasons, the scientists are basically leonardo da vinci tier and they have an actual AI helping them, but the hy[er advanced tech being reverse engineered so quickly is the weirdest and most unrealistic part about this and most sci fi stories

3 things.

1, Stargate is a pulp story at its heart. I will not violate that and I will not make it "hard sci fi". So yes, Carter is Doc Savage with tits and Janet Fraser is a pint sized female Race Bannon :ROFLMAO: and O'Neill is shaping up to be an every man version of Conan I guess.

2, you're assuming they're reverse engineering stuff quickly. That they've only had six months to play with this tech as opposed to say oh I dunno..7 decades? Perhaps longer? The NID has been around since the post bellum decades after all.

3, they have in order. Teal'c who has at least high school level engineering which in a society that advanced. They have user friendly snake tech. They have an AI from who knows where and when Teal'c defected Abydos took on a few refugees. Several of which were Kelownan. Ba'al's eternally rowdy, one bad drilling session away from a riot oil men :ROFLMAO:

The SGC has quite a bit of help here.

I also can't understand how you would think what happened with Horus was a pyrrhic victory as opposed to a total defeat followed by fairy magic saving their rears. You're really hyperfixating on humanity having nice things and not reading the details. They paid a very high price for that.

But yeah, this ain't your average SG fic I guess.
 
eh yeah i guess you're right i am hyperfixating on humanity or earth in specific having those victories, i suppose it's just that you don't really actually ever see actual defeats like bagration for the germans and the start of barbarossa for the soviets or even market garden for the allies in fiction huh like it always seems a string of pyrrhic victories and narrow defeats where the pov character escapes maybe alone.
and on the tech part yeah that makes alot more sense than other series and fics.
 
@August Apparently, you've never read David Weber.

yeah honestly the bits of his work i read were nice but the rest seemed to be unbearable, also i meant most sci-fi stories i read these past few years, not that that really changes much but the bad ones keep sticking out to me wayyy too much.

btw just asking this ahead of time, on earth this won't turn into some weird americawank where china russia and everyone else blindly follows and acquiesces to the us's demands that read like some versailles-tier diktat without alot of concessions right?

not entirely sure that came out right, you're not going to unreasonably paint the us as somehow morally better then russia and china and then proceed to do typical two minute hate style "death to all who aren't white, european and christian" china conquered and balkanized and russia become worse than third world shit-hole type thing right?

EDIT: sorry i've just recently read wayyy to many americans unironically stroking the America F YEAH ,America is a perfect nation that hasn't committed countless war crimes and everything everyone keeps saying all the other countries have done thing wayyy too much i'm just really annoyed at that, everytime someone even brings up america's crimes everyone cries about "whataboutism" while focusing solely on the other party's crimes and not just say something like "yeah america did that but this conversation is about "[insert country]" or anytime some tries to bring up the lies leading up to iraq and say that just maybe the OBVIOUS FUCKING NATO PROPAGANDA might either be overblowing things or outright lying everyone just dismisses the poster as a shill or whatever the word is.

EDIT: and honestly speaking the feeling AMERICA F YEAH i keep getting from this thread honestly worries me a bit.

EDIT:rereading this i suppose my preemptive defense of my question was uncalled for and meaningless and i should have just stuck with a simple will america end up doing what so many american nationalists call for and end up with the american empire winning in the world in this story

honestly speaking i'm mostly still stuck on the part in canon where thor comes down during disclosure and does the whole thing where he says that they prefer if stargate command is under continued control of hammond and his team, which honestly i understand, after all in canon they've done alot for the asgard, but he just comes down and meddles in making sure that the us is in control of all interstellar access that they have for that duration without even acknowledging that they are doing that, on the other hand in canon sg-1 and stargate command actually are surprisingly enough actually moral paragons, like in real life america would have just gitmo'd the tollan and interrogate them for information on advanced technology but stargate command is like in alot of fiction kinda unrealistically actually morally goood,

also i've never actually seen it discussed by anyone but in canon the protected planets treaty was just with america wasn't it?
like did the american government think that perhaps entering into an intergalactic treaty as "Planet Earth" was mildly unreasonable for the other 6 billions or so humans living on the planet that weren't americans? like the whole definition of threat lies with the goa'uld thing might have been kinda important. honestly i'm just mostly still fixiated on the whole "Tau'ri = America" thing rather then "Tau'ri = Earth" but they've basically never specified that before to their allies did they?

will we see more of the peers or system lords like those who were canon?

yeah i think i've said all i felt like i needed to, i'll just sit back and enjoy the fic now i think.
 
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other pieces of fiction, no more like parts of this fic is close to those other pieces of fiction i keep mentioning as a reference, also anyone know a better place where i can rant about my frustrations?
 
I'm going to do what I think is right for the tone and tenor of the story. I'm not going to modify or compromise on that for the sake of avoiding looking like other writers whom I doubt very much would go in the direction I'm ultimately going.

And Stargate at its core was a very patriotic show. The dude who is running the country in this story's entire agenda was "us first even before our allies" and if you think I'm jerking it to NATO an alliance that I personally think is useless and has undermined our culture and enriched our allies at our expense. Then you should just relax.

The secretary of state went to Japan first, before anyone including England. Mirroring Hathor and Ba'al's agenda for the Imperium and the cosmos the US is trying to build a new order at home. With itself at the tip of the spear.
 
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yeah i get that i just think that there is a difference between america being respected as the greatest superpower and the mildly ominous comments on what happens to the other powers earlier in the thread that bring to mind iraq and libya but on china and russia, i mean i'd still read the story ,it really is a great story even then but i'd just try to skip those parts and try to ignore how weird it is.

ignore the long rambling on america not relevant i was just asking if it's going to descend into those weird "FREE TIBET" "FREE EAST TURKESTAN" and "FREE HONG KONG" things that seem to be the prevailing echo online
 
yeah i get that i just think that there is a difference between america being respected as the greatest superpower and the mildly ominous comments on what happens to the other powers earlier in the thread that bring to mind iraq and libya but on china and russia, i mean i'd still read the story ,it really is a great story even then but i'd just try to skip those parts and try to ignore how weird it is.

There won't be a repeat of Iraq and Libya that's for sure.

But the US is gonna be spear heading a very different world order by the time this is over.
 
interesting, though i'm genuinely not sure how you win a "modern cold war" or trade war or whatever they call it, or actually what the US could even really demand of china and russia and even india without it being ridiculously over the top i guess we'll just have to wait.

you know thinking about this even if the us does end up a proto-hyperpower wouldn't intensified global contact and the spreading of the advanced technology mean that it's advantage will be caught up by the other nations in the far future? like it'd feels like it'd be a repeat of post-ww2
 
you know i think it's the first time i've read a sci fi fanfic that makes me genuinely more interested in the alien parts of the story than most of the other parts

how does this actually end for earth? like i'm reasonably certain there's only so many planets the sgc can actually send colonists to right? there is a point where earth just can't expand anymore so like will it be something like a decentralized nato lite in space? i don't there will ever truly be something like a "new world order" one world government type thing though i suppose there MIGHT be a bit more cooperation and like new global laws for the solar system at least when it comes to the defense of earth

also will those minor neutral nations ever make an appearance? like earth greeting the neighbours?
 
you know thinking about this even if the us does end up a proto-hyperpower wouldn't intensified global contact and the spreading of the advanced technology mean that it's advantage will be caught up by the other nations in the far future? like it'd feels like it'd be a repeat of post-ww2

Well the US sort of is a hyperpower, it might have been different if Japan hadn't shit the bed economically in '92 as it's continued growth would have likely came at the expense of China and the Koreas. or if the USSR had stayed solvent or managed to convert to an English style commonwealth.

But like Rome and the Mongol Empire the US is on the cusp of enjoying its second generation of being the unchallenged big Dog and its only internal stupidity that's brought it to the brink of collapse, far sooner than its predecessors.

The danger for a coalition like the SGC HAS to build is that once the existential threats are dealt with, and even before, factions have a tendency to target their neighbors b/c they are so close and have a history of previous conflict. In other words, it's a comfortable argument.

And one can only relieve those social pressures by encouraging outward expansion. Meaning disclosure to prevent the pressures that would cause a third world war is inexorable.

you know i think it's the first time i've read a sci fi fanfic that makes me genuinely more interested in the alien parts of the story than most of the other parts

Hundred thousand year history, several of the figures who built that civilization and shaped cosmic geopolitcs still being alive and well.

It's the one thing the main canon never explored sadly.

how does this actually end for earth? like i'm reasonably certain there's only so many planets the sgc can actually send colonists to right? there is a point where earth just can't expand anymore so like will it be something like a decentralized nato lite in space? i don't there will ever truly be something like a "new world order" one world government type thing though i suppose there MIGHT be a bit more cooperation and like new global laws for the solar system at least when it comes to the defense of earth

You'll see:p


also will those minor neutral nations ever make an appearance? like earth greeting the neighbours?

That's kind of already happening, the US is trading medicine with several renaissance era tech level worlds in exchange for platinum or other materials and trading farming equipment for plants that can produce electricity or treat cancer.

And the whole "We buy pizzas from you and refine the Trinium you adorable monkeys can't refine yourself in exchange for a cut or we blow up planet" from the Tollan.
 
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One thousand pardons for my silence and lack updates. It seems I caught the Asiatic Sniffles, the Wuhan plague, the Coof etc.

I feel fine mind, but these guys wanna hold me until Sunday I think.

So, the conclusion shall have to wait
 
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